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Rainbow Dash: Dreams and visions
A tribute to: My Little Pony Friendship is Magic
Pony POV Series by alexwarlorn

Rainbow Dash found herself standing in the Canterlot garden. The dim moonlight made it difficult to see any details but what she could recognize was Scoots sitting there and crying. Without hesitation the older pegasus approached the filly. Soon Scootaloo noticed her and when she looked into her eyes Rainbow saw that they were red, the poor filly must have cried for so long.

"That jerk just abandoned me," Scootaloo sounded broken. "How could I have been so stupid to listen to Discord of all things? As soon as he got what he wanted he left me behind."

Rainbow Dash felt like someone had stabbed her with icicles.

"Why would you even listen to him? You knew what he did to your friends! The things he did to Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and all of us!" Rainbow erupted, unable to hold back her anger. She heard others come behind her but she didn't care about them.

"I didn't want to listen to him. But he could sound so nice and he promised me that I could stay with you and my friends. He told me that I wouldn't have to go to the orphanage."

"Orphanage?" the voice of Twilight whispered.

Rainbow Dash began to panic. Who knew about her missing parents? Who could have threatened to take Scoots away from her and force her into an orphanage? This didn't make any sense! By now Scootaloo's head hung even lower.

"I thought it was the right thing, that I would help my friends and that Discord was one of them. But the moment the seal broke…"

She trailed off and nodded back with her head. Rainbow took a closer look and froze, staring at a spot of color on Scootaloo's flank: A heart, but made of pink fire. Dash recognized it from the play she'd been a part of. It was the heart from Hearth's Warming Eve and the fire of friendship.

The heart on Scootaloo's flank was split in two by a jagged rupture. She got what she always wanted, her cutie mark and…  and it was a mark of shame. It would remind her for the rest of her life what she had done. What she had unleashed on Equestria. What would the others think about her? Would it even be possible to protect her from all those revenge seeking ponies? Fluttershy had to fight with so many hardships after Princess Gaia but she had at least always Fluttercruel with her.

Scootaloo said something but Rainbow wasn't able to listen. How could everything have gone so wrong? The filly seemed so happy with her and gave her the support she needed with her own problems. Finally Dash was able to see her surroundings and noticed that Princess Celestia and the others were standing behind her. She had so say something, anything to help Scoots.

"I know it looks horrible but at that day Discord got most ponies in Equestria, including you guys and me. Scoots here was one of the few that escaped his grasp. We all did nasty things under his games. She deserves a second chance!"

The Sun Goddess looked at the blue pegasus knowingly. If she was able to forgive her for her betrayal of her friends and for trying to kill Fluttershy to put her out of her misery as Nightmare Whipser then she might be able to forgive this misled filly as well. The Princess looked back at Scootaloo and nodded.

"I will consider that, I know how powerful Discord's deceptions can be. But we must know everything about how he escaped this time. While we try to get to the bottom of this, Twilight, you, your friends and the guards will continue the search."

Twilight nodded and within seconds she and her friends were gone, leaving the princess alone with Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo.

"What will happen next?" asked the orange pegasus.

"For now you'll come with me," Princess Celestia said while smiling warmly at the scared filly.

"But don't worry too much about it. You aren't the first pony Discord deceived. Everything will work out."

Scootaloo nodded and followed behind the princess, Rainbow was sure that it would work out in the end. The filly was merely misled like Discord tricked every single one of them. There was no way that she…

Now you see it as well. It is just like I told you, a clueless filly manipulated by the big bad Discord. They swallowed it, hook, line and sinker.

As Discord's voice echoed through her mind, Rainbow Dash stood still in shock. She tried to process what she just heard and failed. That must have been another deception of the Draconequus. Scootaloo would never do that. She would never betray her like this. She told her that she would stay at her side no matter what, even after they both had that horrible dream where she had killed the filly on Discord's order.

Scootaloo turned around and looked at the Element of Loyalty with the same lifeless eyes Discord had.

"You are such a self-centered nag. You still don't get it. YOU WERE THE ONE THAT WANTED TO SEND ME TO THE ORPHANAGE!"

Rainbow entire body shook in pain. She felt like she was stabbed with a thousand icicles. The Princess broke apart like cheap glass, the entire world dissolved into nothing and finally the frostily smiling filly vanished leaving her all alone in the darkness.

You made it all too easy little Rainbow. After you rejected my generous offer and rejoined the boring Harmony club, I had to find a replacement for you. And then you gave me little Scoots, I can't thank you enough. Now she is my little pony.

Suddenly Rainbow Dash found herself back in her bed. For a moment she was surprised that she didn't fall out of her bed or awaken with a scream like it happens in the stories she read. However her entire body was still shaking with cold. She felt nothing warm next to her, she didn't feel that Scootaloo was nearby. For a few seconds she wanted to panic, before she remembered that the filly was sleeping in her own room tonight.

Carefully the cyan pegasus slipped out of the bed and walked past Tank's terrarium. She didn't trip over any random piece of Wonderbolt merchandise. The bedroom and pretty much every room in her house surely got a lot cleaner and orderly after the filly began living here. When they weren't arguing about it both cleaned up the house.

As Tank slowly raised his head to see what was going on the pegasus had already left the room.

Slowly she approached Scoots room, only to find the filly on the ground next to her bed. Rainbow had to chuckle when she could still hear her snoring and the body of the older pegasus stopped shaking. Carefully she picked up the little one and placed her back into her bed. She was still asleep, still without a cutie mark and still the filly she knew. Silently Dash tucked her in and left the room.

She would never do something like that. Scootaloo was the loyalist filly in the world. If there was anypony who could also carry the Element of Loyalty then it was her. The Pegasus remembered what Pinkie Pie told them several times about these strange other worlds. That was before her very long nap and most of it sounded like nonsense like that world where they were all stallions but after these dreams Rainbow wondered if there was more to it. Maybe there was one world were Scootaloo would make that choice but that wasn't this world.

Dash wondered why she had these strange dreams. First the one with her battle against an older Scootaloo and now this. Did they mean something or were they just a sign that Rainbow shouldn't volunteer herself for Sweetie Belle's cooking experiments any longer? Maybe she would ask Pinkie Pie about trying some of those meals, if it would be dangerous her Pinkie Sense would surely go off.

But the thought of losing Scootaloo to child services didn't leave her. The entire time Rainbow was afraid of losing the filly if she should find her parents. It didn't stop her from trying to find them of course. How could she completely forget about the other ways this could end? One pony putting the pieces together and acting with the best of intentions would be enough. Somepony just needed to contact the officials and then they would come and take her away. Why did the version of herself contact the orphanage? Maybe she also had good intentions and thought she was doing the right thing.

Back in her room she noticed Tank still staring into the air. It took him a few seconds to react to her and he started to smile one of his slow smiles.

"Tank, tomorrow we will start Operation Moving Target. Is that clear?"

The pet tortoise nodded and saluted his owner, both of course very slowly.

Eventually Rainbow found herself falling asleep again. Then she heard an annoying sound and half asleep charged at the source. Instead it moved aside and caused her to crash into a wall. That did hurt a lot less than it sounded like since the walls were all made of clouds. It was still early and Celestia hadn't raised the sun yet.  

"Huh? Wait? What?"

Finally she was completely awake and saw Tank hovering next to her side with her alarm clock in his feet. She had to laugh, even after all these years she would just attack the buzzer and fall back asleep. The pegasus had missed so many appointments that way. But Tank was (with his propeller) fast enough to avoid her sleepy charge. Rainbow really needed to thank Fluttercruel for that idea, even if she wondered if she was serious when she suggested that. And Tank was durable enough to withstand anything less than a Sonic Rainboom.

"Thanks Tank! I know I can always count on you."

While her cooking abilities had become better that wasn't saying much. Rainbow still had a very limited range of eatable meals but Scoots always enjoyed her omelet. And the filly was able to (extremely politely) tell her when one meal didn't turn out the way it should have. Like the cake that started to move on its own.

But for now Dash concentrated on what she could do and prepared breakfast for them and the filly. Meanwhile Tank was calmly hovering around the kitchen. Soon everything was done and looked thankfully very eatable. And right on cue Scoots entered the kitchen.

She noticed the meal and with a sudden speed normally reserved for Pinkie Pie the filly sat on her stool and began to eat. Soon Rainbow and Tank joined her as well. If there was one thing the filly could already do faster than her mentor, it was eating. But soon she began to stare at the older pegasus. Was her mane that messy?

"Did you have a nightmare?"

The orange filly looked at her idol with her big purple eyes. They were nothing like Discord's. Dash wondered if she really was that easy to read or if the filly simply knew her that well by this point. It would be the easiest choice to tell her that nightmare was about anything else but her betrayal. A dream about being baked into a cupcake would be a nice excuse. And even Applejack won't mind if she would lessen the traumatising horror of what she had dreamed about.

"Yes, I had a terrible nightmare about losing you to child services. The worst thing was that in the dream I was the one who told them."

"Dash, you would never…"

The older pegasus pulled her closer to herself and hugged her and.

"That is why I am sharing the nightmare with you. I just wanted you to know that I would never do something like that."

The sun was raised just on time and light filled the room. Tank looked at the two pegasi who were now his new family. In the beaming light only their silhouettes could be seen and the two appeared so similar.

"I didn't think for a minute that you would do something like that to hurt me. Even if… even if you would send me to an orphanage you would have a good reason. I don't care what the others say."

Rainbow had something in her eye. This pure absolute faith the filly had in her made her feel so strong, almost like Daring Do. The pegasus felt like she could face impossible odds and win. The orange filly looked at her for a moment and slowly moved away from her, rushed outside the room and came back with a box in her mouth.

"When Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and I slapped the sealing on Twilight's horn after she acted funny the mayor gave us some bits as a reward for saving Ponyville. I brought us something from my share."

Scootaloo pulled out two tickets for the upcoming anniversary Wonderbolts show.

"Scoots, you… you have actually left me speechless."

Scootaloo had to laugh. Then both pegasi looked at each other and hugged. Tank floated around them slowly.

"Does this mean I don't have to clean my room?"

"Nope!"

"Dang."

"Today we clean it together."

No nightmare could break them apart.
This is another tribute to a series of fanfiction by :iconalexwarlorn: about the popular series “My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic”. And many thanks for Beta Reading this story.

Rainbow Dash has a horrible nightmare of a world where she and Scootaloo are torn apart by a painful betrayal. But her new family is there for her.

The scene Rainbow experiences in her dream is from Discordant ([link]).

Please comment.

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zaku789 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
good work.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015
Thank you!
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
Still like this.
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Grogar-the-oneser Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
good stuff.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
Thank you!
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SomeRandomMinion Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
Thanks a lot.
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SomeRandomMinion Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014
You're Welcome.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
I have no right to ask this. But would you consider writing a short drabble that is a sort of sequel to this?

Now that Scootaloo has earned her cutie mark, she's adverted this future. (And RD becoming her guardian is RD's own way of trying to advert it too).

I wonder if you could write a short drabble of RD and Scoots at home after they get back from the wedding. And RD realized not just how proud, but how RELIEVED she is at Scootaloo's cutie mark.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014
I do like the idea but the problem is the same as always: time.

I would like to write something, I do like the idea you suggested but I don't know if I will have the time to do so. :(
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
Thank you so much for writing this. Again, just thank you so much.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Rainbow Dash felt like someone had stabbed her with icicle.
Rainbow Dash felt like someone had stabbed her with icicles.

had this horrible dream where she had killed the filly on Discord's order.
had that horrible dream where she had killed the filly on Discord's order.

with thousand icicles.
with a thousand icicles.

For a few second she wanted to panic,
For a few seconds she wanted to panic,

Operation Moving Target.
Why call it that?

Like the cake that started to move on its own.
BWAHAHAH!
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Thank you for all the corrections.

I thought "Operation Moving Target" was a fitting name since Tank is himself the moving target and both he and Rainbow trust each other enough to do this.

"Like the cake that started to move on its own."

For a while I considered adding that Princess Celestia ended up eating it on one of her visits but then I thought that this might be a bit too much.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
I get moving target now. :-)

Hard to say when anything is enough or too much. Jokes should be concise. Or that's what I think anyway.

But knowing Celestia . . . that would be funny. But might be overextending the joke.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Cakelestia VS Magic Cake

FIGHT!!!

nom nom nom

Cakelestia wins! Flawless victory!
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
:-D
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
So many worlds, so many dark fates. My one complaint about Discordant is that while it IS Scoot's story, the other Elements of Discord aren't given as much exploration as they should and the solutions IMHO have some fridge logic (I said all this in my comment on the story anyway).
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
If I remember it correctly then Spike was the Element of Greed, something that could have been turned into its own story.

Or maybe the results of the absence of the Changeling Queen from her swarm could lead to interesting results like forcing the Changelings to live on their own and without the rule of the Queen.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
"Or maybe the results of the absence of the Changeling Queen from her swarm could lead to interesting results like forcing the Changelings to live on their own and without the rule of the Queen."

I always figured it would result in them engaging in a sucidal campagin of revenge to kill every pony they could while they lasted.

"If I remember it correctly then Spike was the Element of Greed, something that could have been turned into its own story. "

Same with the rest.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
"I always figured it would result in them engaging in a sucidal campagin of revenge to kill every pony they could while they lasted."

That might happen, I guess it depends on how strong their survival instinct is and how Changelings are able to react without the rule and control of their Queen. Can they even survive without a Queen? Would they become more feral and animalistic or would they become more individual once they are forced to think for themselves?

After all the one Changeling who went along with Pinkie Pie's "Do me!" joke did show that they can apparently make individual thoughts.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
The comics show or at least suggest HEAVILY that they are individually sapient. Also they do NOT have a hive mind (since Chrysalis' scoots needed to REPORT to her).
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
So maybe the swarm would fall apart without the Queen and since the Changelings can think individually they might build their own lives. There would be so many possibilities.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
I honestly think maybe we should include a link to the fic that inspired this. [link]
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
Thanks for pointing this out! I have added a link.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
For the record, this stry should be listed HERE [link]
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Thank you. So far the ones updating the TV tropes pages of the Pony POV Series hadn't added it.

But there are a few stories that really should get a mention there like the tales taking place in the alternate universes created by Zabuzaacolyte (even if I don't like the turn of the last chapter) or by Kyonsylar.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
would make this choice but that wasn't this world.
would make that choice but that wasn't this world.

Pie about trying some of these meals,
Pie about trying some of those meals,

Operation Moving Target.
????

Like the cake that started to move on its own.

And I am forever reminded of that quote form a Ranma 1/2 fanfic that took Akane's crazy cooking to criminally BAD cooking to:

Scootaloo, "Rainbow Dash! Your cake tried to molest me!"

Rainbow Dash, "It wasn't trying to molest you! It was just being friendly!"

And the Simpsons on the boogie-man of genetically modified food.
"Mom! My potato is eating my carrot!"

And right on clue Scoots entered the kitchen.
And right on cue Scoots entered the kitchen.

I don't care what the others say."
The others?

I now have a vision of an adult Scootaloo shouting "ALL FOR MASTER DISCORD!" Where she was the Element of Treachery instead of Rainbow Dash. And her body being covered in scars from several (willing and consensual) play time with Fluttercruel. WANTING to keep the scars so they don't simply regenerate.

And Fluttercruel looking over her dead body, having died protecting HER, and Fluttercruel blaming the heroes and going NIGHTMARE and becoming Nightmare Purgatory instead of Twilight.


"When Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and I slapped the sealing on Twilight's horn after she acted funny the mayor gave us some bits as a reward for saving Ponyville. I brought us something from my share."

I begin to wonder if including that incident in my story world was such a good idea.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
“Operation Moving Target“

This refers to the move Rainbow taught Tank so that the pet is able to wake Dash up in time for preparing breakfast.

"It wasn't trying to molest you! It was just being friendly!"

"Mom! My potato is eating my carrot!" (There you can see it, even your potato knows that carrots are healthy. Now eat them before your potato has eaten them all.)

Now that is funny. :) It reminds me slightly of a fanfiction where Trixie was cursed by Poison Joke with REALLY horrible luck and ended up in a cooking competition. You can guess that this couldn’t end well. If I remember correctly she had to defeat her own cooking monstrosity.

“The others?“

Scootaloo wouldn’t care what others say about why Rainbow sent her to an orphanage. She wouldn’t believe that her big sister had just abandoned her and the filly would be sure that Dash would have a good reason for it.

But I have to admit that Scootaloo as the Element of Treachery is a very unnerving idea: A masochist who is together with a sadist. This might be more pleasant for Fluttercruel and Angry Pie, but if there was an Element of Treachery that actually enjoys her job, Fluttercruel’s body count could be even higher if Scootaloo could help her to find victims with her powers and then both would torture them together. Not to mention that Scootaloo might kill much more mortals over the 1000 years then Rainbow ever would.

It sounds like something that would make the world even bleaker than it already is.

Not to mention that this would show that Rainbow Dash was completely right about killing someone like Gilda who could be another Element of Treachery on the reasoning that they would be even worse than she is.

But on the other hand maybe finding someone like herself would keep Fluttercruel busy and would cause her to kill fewer mortals and have less time to torment Fluttershy’s friends.

Thank you for the long comment and the corrections. I have changed these parts.
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CottonSnourth Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Professional Writer
"I now have a vision of an adult Scootaloo shouting "ALL FOR MASTER DISCORD!" Where she was the Element of Treachery instead of Rainbow Dash. And her body being covered in scars from several (willing and consensual) play time with Fluttercruel. WANTING to keep the scars so they don't simply regenerate."

...Uh... she'd KEEP the scars? You sure?

Not for anything, but here's the way that I see it: in order for there to be TREACHERY, you first have to have TRUST, right? Dupe people into trusting you? That's how the most successful betrayals usually go.

I mean, if Scootaloo's going to go around with a bunch of scary sadomasochistic scars, and come off looking like Chucky did in The Bride Of Chucky,

[link]

She might as well wear a spiky black leather jacket with "I. M. A. Baddy" written on the back, too. Be great if she'd been another Element of CRUELTY... (you can STILL do a good job ruining someone's day by simply being an overt antagonist,) but as TREACHERY, she'd pretty much scare off the prey.

If anything, I'd think she'd go around with the outward demeanor of that Hummingbird girl in Deadman Wonderland:

[link]

And save the blood play for behind closed doors.

...Or would Scootaloo the Treacherous be the type who'd always be casting illusions spells on herself, like a changeling?
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
I thought you didn't watch that anime. And you didn't want me to tell you about that anime.

And I agree with your logic.

BUT THE POINT is able to show in a visual way that Element of Treachery Scootaloo would have a much better relationship with Angry Pie and Fluttercruel than Traitor Dash did.
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CottonSnourth Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Professional Writer
-- I thought you didn't watch that anime. And you didn't want me to tell you about that anime. - -

Actually, what ended up happening is that I changed my mind entirely about Deadman Wonderland. Kept hearing it mentioned around TV Tropes and got curious.

Watched the anime. Loved it. Read the manga. Loved it.

HATE the fact that its author hasn't updated in forever, and has just left it... HANGING for months!
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
They couldn't even give the anime a happy ending when the manga got cut short.
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Pimsleurable Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
I salute you.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
Thank you.

What did you like the most?

I try to learn something from each story I write and your feedback might help me to see what worked well and what didn't.
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Pimsleurable Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
Even though they are not tied by blood, and no matter how you put it, but Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo make the best sisters. You did a fine job on that premise.

I myself am trying to write a story, but, I have something much more bitter sweet planned. I felt reading these fan fics would help inspire me. I had come up with a few ideas and characters in my head cannon.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
Thank you for this comment. I am happy that I managed to do something good with that idea.

And good luck with your story. If it is your very first story I would advice you to concentrate on few characters and try to focus on their character development and growth.
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Pimsleurable Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
Thanks.
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QuickSilverPaul Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
Combination POV series and Discordant? What could possibly go wrong?
Nothing, as it turns out. And I already knew that. Good work.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
Thank you and thanks to the concept of the multiverse and Truth the Pony POV Series is compatible to almost everything pony-related. And Discord is similar manipulative in both stories.
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CottonSnourth Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Professional Writer
I really enjoyed this story, ItsfromPeople.

Loved the contrast between the one Scootaloo's two-faced vengefulness, and the other's full-hearted loyalty.

And by the way... every one of the extremely extensive reviews you give when we release a new chapter ROCKS. It's like having the story told right back to us in the most entertaining way.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Thank you.

I have to admit that one of my favourite parts was that even after the other Scootaloo admitted that she released Discord, Rainbow still stood up for her. She would have been there for the filly even after doing this to everyone. But Dash didn't notice that this was a glimpse into a different world.

I am glad that you enjoy my reviews.
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ardashir Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
It's very lovely. Poor Scoots and Dashie! This really is what would happen if Dash had a dream about Scootaloo going over to Discord.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Good you think like this. I also believe that their loyalty is stronger than any nightmare or vision. They even conquered the tragic battle of the Epilogue together.
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ardashir Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Yeah, Dash and Scoots wouldn't be easily broken apart. I wonder if it would even be possible.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
I rather dread what Discord might think of to break them apart. There will always be the problem of conflicting loyalties, like the loyalty Rainbow has to her friends or to the Princesses. But I think that this cheap trick would never break her as horrible as last time, she had gotten much stronger since then.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
You read Berry and Cheerilee's story yet?
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Not yet, but I will as soon as I have time.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Good. They're WORTH reading! And the story with Cheerie and Berry has my Loose Canon stamp of approval.
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ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
I just read it. The scene were Berry drinks the entire bottle that tastes absolutely horrible for her because she knows that she couldn’t resist the vile temptation if her child would come back is incredible emotional. The mother literally protects the foal from her own weakness and is completely willing to kill herself for it.
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
Tell the AUTHOR that! He needs more encouragement!
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